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  • Title: 1st Comic Strip Page :D
  • Artist: Yuri Yagari
  • Description: a comic page(pg.4) it was finished on Nov. 11, 2011, I've been restricted by my writer to put the words on the story, but i can still post it anyway.

    I've penciled, inked, scanned, screentone, and edit it, but still kind of edgy, and forgot to put the background either, well still gotta practice though...( _ _llI)

    Comment me Good or Bad, so that I can do it better than before~!,
    Thanks for the comments and ratings~! :D
  • Date: 10/29/2012
  • Tags: comic strip
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Comments (2 Comments)
  • neko-axe - 02/17/2013
  • But overall, the comic is a good start. The only thing that I can say requires immediate work is how you ink the hair. Black hair typically only has shines where light hits it at the top/where the light source hits it so the white lines and spots further down the head makes it look bad and doesn't lend to texture.
  • neko-axe - 02/17/2013
  • Like you already said, this page needs/ed a background in at least the 1st and 4th panels. The inking also needs to be worked on a bit, it needs to be smoother and less sketchy to match the style of the comic. I can't tell if you did the inking entirely on the computer or just the panels but you can fix it by doing some line practices with a pen or messing with some settings on the program you use
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