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- Title: Insanity,Laurence,&Anna Prt 1
- Artist: Kaibutsu-tan
- Description: I couldn't think of a better title at this point.... Maybe I will eventually... Just something I've been working on... Kind of in the rough, but as I said, I'm working on it... Wanted to write something about someone going insane... Might have its moments of unrealisticness(ha, not a real word), cause Im not that great at all that *shrugs* lemme know what ya think. Here's Part 1.... I'll post part two a in a few minutes...
- Date: 07/03/2010
- Tags: insanitylaurencemimzy
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Mario the Davidic Hero - 08/18/2010
- not bad.... not bad at all! 5/5 smile
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- Kaibutsu-tan - 07/07/2010
- I KNOW XD... I had NO idea that Mimzy was even a freakin movie, I felt so stupid, dang, I gotta change the girls name now....
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- Ealdwic - 07/07/2010
- It's interesting. I admit that I felt disappointed when I read 'Mimzy', but... Your writing is redeeming, and I should give it a chance, even if I didn't really like that movie at all. Is this a fan-fiction, then? smile Only thing I can critique is that you sometimes are using a comma instead of a period right before someone speaks. In cases where you're pausing dialogue before they finish a sentence, it's fine, but if the dialogue has yet to begin, you use a period. ^ ^ That's all! 4/5~
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