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- | Submitted on 02/13/2010 |
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- Title: Repetition
- Artist: Dapper Swain
- Description: Here's a little something I thought I'd do as I listen to my girlfriend on the phone say that there's just a bit many of those emo poetry that we'd expect to find on the internet, especially here on Gaia. So hopefully this is something different that you will all find interesting to dissect.
- Date: 02/13/2010
- Tags: repetition clone monotone
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Sancerre - 01/05/2012
- Now this is an interesting piece. I enjoy the alliteration, though you do use a lot of it. It works well throughout most of the piece, though. Overall, a really great piece of writing. 4/5
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- Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX - 02/21/2010
- I do like it but the endding was kind of a bore suprizingly and I think people write emo poetry because they know its what others want to hear so 4/5 smile
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- seven_Sin_incarnate - 02/20/2010
- eh, i disagree. cursing can add somthing.... gritty... if used correctly. i really liked it.
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- Yureiaa Hearts - 02/13/2010
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;p Nice, until your "make 'em eat s**t" phrase came along.
Satan (Braitsch) taught me that wanton cursing hurts your piece.
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