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  • Title: A Blind Wish
  • Artist: iWhipYou
  • Description: A stormy evening
    All is silent
    Gentle peace.
    A child lay
    Helpless.
    An angel
    Fallen.
    The angel child
    She is different
    No wings.
    Angels, they say
    Bring peace
    This child
    Nobody.
    No one knew her
    No one saw her
    Some say she's spirit
    Some say she's live
    They do not know
    Her own part here.
    She is spirit
    She is live.
    She wanders the clouds
    The child.
    Blind to all, but peace
    She knows only her own heart
    Guiding her
    On her journey for her own
    She is
    The Fallen Wish.
  • Date: 12/24/2009
  • Tags: fallen wish wind hope angel
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • iWhipYou - 01/28/2010
  • The whole topic of the avatar is The Fallen Wish so obviously I spammed the s**t out of that item xP

    I honestly don't care about recycled opinions over the fact that I used 50,000 Fallen Wishes. I get it, I can't change the avi now since I've already lost so much, so please post something useful :p
  • oiwio - 12/31/2009
  • i really don't care what items are repeatedly use, since the value is much more worth noticing than that, but i think i'll give you 4/5. I slightly like the description, but liked how you used the items in the Fallen wish, although it's too simple nevertheless it's very a pretty good entry.
  • Mystic Requiem - 12/31/2009
  • iEmoRio bring up a good point. All you used is the Fallen Wish, and a few other items. That take no creativity at all to spam one item and then add a few things. Plus, it looks like you were going for a matching avi, which means the skin kills what you were going for. it would have been better to use the lotus cloud skin. 2/5
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