- by BaconTheGreat |
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- | Submitted on 09/02/2009 |
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- Title: Fire Gem
- Artist: BaconTheGreat
- Description: Fransine the orphan picked out a dress from a clothes drive. She tried it on and it fit nicely. Finding some boots she put them on. The left toe was stuffed with something. Reaching in she pulled out a red diamond shaped gem! She stared into its center of dancing colors all the way back to the orphanage. She felt warm till she was burning up with a fever? She looked into the mirror to see if she was pale. But weird Fire Wings that had been lit behind her back caught her attention!
- Date: 09/02/2009
- Tags: fire gemstone crazyeyes orphan
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Comments (5 Comments)
- BaconTheGreat - 09/11/2009
- Thanks everybody for the nice feedback. biggrin
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- MissJayKay - 09/11/2009
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oh my, crazy eyes!
fun story too! - Report As Spam
- ruby98 - 09/09/2009
- This is great. The story was awesome, and the avi is pretty cool. 5.
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- BiiKuu - 09/07/2009
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The mini story goes well with the avi. Good job, even if you did have to cut it short.
5/5 - Report As Spam
- BaconTheGreat - 09/02/2009
- My description sounds so dry and bare. I had it more detailed but Gaia wanted it to be only 500 characters. So all that extra stuff ended up on the cutting room floor, as it were.
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