- by -Whoa_Antlers- |
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- | Submitted on 08/08/2009 |
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- Title: Sara
- Artist: -Whoa_Antlers-
- Description: first slam poem
- Date: 08/08/2009
- Tags: sara
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Echo Ligeia - 07/11/2010
- Hmm. This is a fair slam poem. Good emotion, good story-telling, and the use of childhood imagery is very clever and really pulls the reader heart-strings. There are a few typos that I wish you would fix, and sometimes the imagery is confused with Forest Gump, cheetahs and space. But otherwise, good work! ^^
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- the_ashen_child - 08/09/2009
- Wow, not only is that well written, but i almost started crying! it really dose hurt to see the people you love change for the worst.
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