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  • lolz adventures : shadowranger
  • Title: lolz adventures : shadowranger
  • Artist: Dosi san
  • Description: im making a dosi lolz adventures... this is my serious one..
    im making all kinds of comics of the specific character...
    im sorry for the lined paper its all i got

    dosi:...?
    Shawdow Ranger go!!

    police:Everyone FIRE!!!
    police 2: aight!!
    police 3: sir!
    *psssshew!!! pshheww!!*
    ploice: IT DIDNT WORK!!
    fall back!!

    don: watch out....
    your here...
    dosi:yah i was here but...
    shadow:you think you friut cakes can stop me!!

    *sweeeeeeeeeeeeo!!*
  • Date: 07/11/2009
  • Tags: dosi adventures shawdow
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Yume_Silvermoon - 10/26/2009
  • Hmm, interesting story! I think it would be more dynamic if you vary the layout of the panels a little bit more. Maybe even have a character "cross over" several panels sometimes to show a progression of events in the background. Or during her transformation scene, it might look neat to forego panels altogether and just have kind of a collage. (Just offered as example, of course. I'm not trying to tell you how to write your story.)
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