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- | Submitted on 07/04/2009 |
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- Title: Solar System
- Artist: CaptainSpaz00
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Description:
I had to write a poem for a Language Arts assignment. Rather than write my poem about love, or sadness, or anger, or a pet, or any of those other things that everybody wrote their poem on, I wrote about the Solar System.
PLEASE COMMENT - Date: 07/04/2009
- Tags: solar system
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Comments (2 Comments)
- CaptainSpaz00 - 08/24/2009
- I tried putting them in order but I couldn't work out how to do the rhymes.
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- Amber Skyes - 07/07/2009
- A rather accurate description, I'd say, but it could flow a lot better if you put the planets in order. It also has very simple rhymes.
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