- by sweetgirl101209 |
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- | Submitted on 06/28/2009 |
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- Title: Love
- Artist: sweetgirl101209
- Description: any comments or suggestions would be great :)
- Date: 06/28/2009
- Tags: love pain strong
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- 2pound - 05/31/2012
- i suggest you learn the meaning of the word "metaphor" before you write about love again; also, the word "cliche" and i suggest you do it ASAP, otherwise, your poem is deaf, blind, and boring. 1/10
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- ABluejay - 06/30/2009
- good I guess. But a poem isn't just rhymes.
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