- by Lee Olivander |
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- | Submitted on 06/18/2009 |
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- Title: Who are you?
- Artist: Lee Olivander
- Description: A short story. By Filia Of Umbra (Daughter of the Shadows)
- Date: 06/18/2009
- Tags: angel accident
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Jackie Tekila - 07/13/2009
- I like it! The rag doll figure in the mother's arms is the girl, no? I was just confused about that for a few seconds for some reason. Also just a little help on grammar if I may, the use of ... is for when a piece of text has been removed. At least that is how I read that use of punctuation. Also, I think she gives her mother a kiss on the cheek not on the check. Just a few tiny mistakes. Overall I really liked it. Good work! I think I'm going to go check out some of your other entries.
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- AzMiss - 06/21/2009
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Way cool...I love fiction! keep up writing maybe become a famous writer. Good luck in the voting!! 5 stars,,,,i vote 10 stars
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- xXWhoWants2BNormalNeWayXx - 06/20/2009
- Best thing I've read all day!
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- flavapop3 - 06/20/2009
- really emotional
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- Cerberus0.4 - 06/19/2009
- Nice......Very nice..I love it. 5/5
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