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  • Title: Who are you?
  • Artist: Lee Olivander
  • Description: A short story. By Filia Of Umbra (Daughter of the Shadows)
  • Date: 06/18/2009
  • Tags: angel accident
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Comments (5 Comments)
  • Jackie Tekila - 07/13/2009
  • I like it! The rag doll figure in the mother's arms is the girl, no? I was just confused about that for a few seconds for some reason. Also just a little help on grammar if I may, the use of ... is for when a piece of text has been removed. At least that is how I read that use of punctuation. Also, I think she gives her mother a kiss on the cheek not on the check. Just a few tiny mistakes. Overall I really liked it. Good work! I think I'm going to go check out some of your other entries.
  • AzMiss - 06/21/2009
  • Way cool...I love fiction! keep up writing maybe become a famous writer. Good luck in the voting!! 5 stars,,,,i vote 10 stars
 
 
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