- by SweetSourLady |
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- | Submitted on 06/10/2009 |
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- Title: Running
- Artist: SweetSourLady
- Description: ~Ok so....well i'm not very good, i already no that. I got really bored so i wrote this story-its about a girl named Marie who has to deal with the problems of having an abusive-alcoholic-overprotective dad.... and well this is just the beginning, im not sure if i wanna finish the story cuz i dont no were to lead it from here so any suggestions?
- Date: 06/10/2009
- Tags: running dads abusive overprotective alcoholic
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- 00Genious - 06/11/2009
- Perhaps you could go into detail about how he was overprotective, or how it affected her at school or with her friends. It's really good writing, the right amout of description. Great job!!
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