- Title: Time in Focus
- Artist: tomboi57
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Description:
Ok. This a the prologue and the beginning of Chapter ONE to the book i am writing. I have a little over 2 chapters done. Maybe I'll post some excerpts later. Let me know what you think....
Copywrite 2009 - Date: 05/21/2009
- Tags: time focus travel ghosts
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Comments (6 Comments)
- tomboi57 - 06/06/2009
- Thanks guys! It's great to hear oppinions from people that are not family or close friends. Hopefully it'll be on bookshelves before too long..... Thanks again!
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- XxX_-Shyy-_XxX - 05/30/2009
- This story is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!
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- Child-of-Darkness-1234 - 05/29/2009
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WOOOOAAAAHHHHHHHHH
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- x Kyo Inuzuka x - 05/28/2009
- This story is AMAZING!!!
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- true2trust26 - 05/25/2009
- I love it! these type of stories can usually confuse ppl when they have the past and the present tenses. u did a great job making it easy to understand! it's nice how u started ur first chapter more about how he started, and about wat the story's really about, but still keeping it in dialog and in the story instead of just the boy talking like it's a biography. love it, plz make another one.
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- keikogomi - 05/25/2009
- I like the storyline so far. Your writing style is pretty good, two things to watch for are tense (past or present), and the introduction of new characters. You are definitely on your way to a fabulous story. Looking forward to hearing more from you!
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