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  • Title: #1
  • Artist: The Satoshi
  • Description: This is page #1 of the online yuri comic Scarecrow Lullaby if you want to see the comic in it's full version click the link below
    http://www.drunkduck.com/ScareCrow_Lullaby/

    THIS IS MY COMIC I MADE IT WITH MY OWN HANDS!!!
    Content ©2008, 2009, 2010 Satoshi.
  • Date: 05/02/2009
  • Tags: scarecrow lullaby comic webcomic yuri
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Catalytic Productions - 09/13/2012
  • I would have to disagree with the commenters below. It's not professional standard. But it's not half bad either. Your rendering of scenic backgrounds needs work, but at least you've given them a go. I recommend choosing a more comic-like and easily readable font rather than some random serif font. And the character's narration seems excessive. We can *see* that she bumped into someone so there's no need to tell us that. A simple "Augh!" would suffice. Show, don't tell.
  • Kitsunewinter - 02/10/2011
  • i think you should talk to some publishing company's because you should be published. it's you're choice but you are amazing and i think others would love to see you're work. 5/5
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