- by belletbien |
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- | Submitted on 03/21/2009 |
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- Title: somthing in the lake
- Artist: belletbien
- Description: its about a girl named cindy and and her mother name kirra and they have 1 brother named jimmy and so one day they went to a lake and saw somthing freaky :O...btw im 11 so this is my best work :D......
- Date: 03/21/2009
- Tags: behind river
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Comments (5 Comments)
- belletbien - 03/26/2009
- ok thnx biggrin and i will............
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- dysartb13 - 03/26/2009
- good but work on your grammar
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- belletbien - 03/22/2009
- thank u both!! biggrin
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- II Random_Hugz II - 03/21/2009
- kewl story
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- Lizabite - 03/21/2009
- I'll give you some credit 'cause yur 11, but still, Capitalization & punctuation were horrible and the story plot happened too fast. i sort of liked the plot but please elaborate on it!
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