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- | Submitted on 02/01/2009 |
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- Title: umm...Differance
- Artist: Icklejabob
- Description: My First Poem ever, i dont know what to think about it, because i've never written, or, for that matter, read any poems before, but my friend said that i should try doing so, so heres the outcome
- Date: 02/01/2009
- Tags: ummdifferance
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Comments (4 Comments)
- NakedJack - 02/03/2009
- The concept of artistic credit, you wrote this, every word was picked by you for a reason. That is as much credit as one could get. So now matter how dumb it sounds to another, if you have full credit, then it must be over their heads to get how its art. Not just good writing, but good art as well. I don't know if that describes you fully, but this is spectacular art, so I don't know if the word choices should be commented on.
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- Icklejabob - 02/01/2009
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thanks, ill keep it in mind
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- aL ycious - 02/01/2009
- Um, word choice and rhythm needs work. You'll get the hang of it eventually.
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- Desiccated Devotion - 02/01/2009
- This is amazing, you should definitely do some more poetry! Its incredibly deep, also. I love it! 5 stars.
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