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- | Submitted on 12/27/2008 |
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- Title: TheSaviorOfTheCelestialRealm
- Artist: winterskiergirl
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Description:
kk i worte this for a homework assignment i had for my reading class
im gonna fix it sooner or later...but i like it anyway
when i do fix it it will be more detailed and what not hah - Date: 12/27/2008
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- chewy8mysox - 04/15/2009
- in the first paragraph you should show us vs. tell. like explain some actions or situations so we can infer that she is 16, pretty, magic etc
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