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  • Memorial Hearts. - Page 1
  • Title: Memorial Hearts. - Page 1
  • Artist: I n t o x i c a t e d Joy
  • Description: The end of it may looked a bit rushed ( Which it kind of was )
    And i might of wanted to add in more things but i felt that it was finished enough! ^o^
    This would be the first page of any manga i've ever submitted to publically on the net, so im really proud of myself! I hope you enjoy it!
    If you find it a bit confusing, dont worry! The story and plot will unfold more when i start submitting the next few pages.
  • Date: 11/08/2008
  • Tags: memorial hearts page
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • xXUnloved_ShiningamiXx - 11/29/2009
  • Oh my gosh its so cute! But, next time, don't rush it and it would look much much better ^^ Btw, NEVER EVER color it! It would look horrible! Lol. Its perfect the way it is! Love the story line! 10/5 ;3
  • Shiro-Jin - 09/30/2009
  • I have a suggestion for ya, one that halped me when I started making manga (which I've kinda stopped since then because I have no time for it). You should have no more than 6 panels to a page, because otherwise your readers will just get confused. I learned that when I made my first one, because I think I had... Maybe 30 panels on one page? I really like what you have so far, it wasn't confusing to me at all as far as reading it goes. -nodnod-
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