- Title: chapter 2
- Artist: orimaku
- Description: second chapter...MORE DRAMA!!!
- Date: 10/17/2008
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- kovujackson - 10/17/2008
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DUDE!!!! SUSPENSE!!!! this is the only one i've read and im already hooked. my only suggestion is to separate the dialogue and the descriptions like "talk talk" he said
then on a new line "talk " she replied you know?
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