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- | Submitted on 10/11/2008 |
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- Title: How could u
- Artist: I_Love_cookies_1996
- Description: how ur friend turned away and broke ur heart.
- Date: 10/11/2008
- Tags: could
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Comments (6 Comments)
- onionio - 01/02/2009
- I thought your poem was a bit bipolar. First it was portraying depression, then anger. it was a little confuzing. also, i thought it was annoying that you used pictures to replace words. That would have worked if you used this method consistantly throughout the poem, but since you only used pictures twice, it just seemed as if you couldn't think of a word to use. However, you had some unique ideas and you correctly spelled most of your words without writing the whole poem using text talk.
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- 101sarah - 10/11/2008
- i give it 10 tht is the most beautiful thing i have ever read
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- cookie monster 0_0 rawr - 10/11/2008
- o thats good
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- cookie monster 0_0 rawr - 10/11/2008
- umum um
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- Angorez Daemora - 10/11/2008
- Yeah... re type that in proper English please.
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- moonlight_desires001 - 10/11/2008
- sorry, but I don't really enjoy chat speak in poems. It disturbs me quite a lot..... also, I don't like that bad word you used... how old am I? five? NO! It's only that I am a bit childish and thinks that bad words are not nice... it's still a good poem though...
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