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- | Submitted on 10/01/2008 |
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- Title: Special forces Part I RD
- Artist: Zero Inferno X
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Description:
I AM NOT AIMING FOR PUNUCTIONS RIGHT NOW!!!! so dont count against that all im aiming for is to see what people think of the story idea and to see if anyone has any ideas so shut it about my compusation and just judge it by the idea for now
If you want to no what is being judged fully and not
anything that IS NOT will have RD for rough draft
Anything that is final will have FC for Final Copy and will go through to my story
- Date: 10/01/2008
- Tags: special forces part
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Mr Creepy Stalker - 10/02/2008
- That'll be a great idea, i'll try to think of some names that might be cool, let me add you as a friend so we can keep in touch
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- Zero Inferno X - 10/02/2008
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well i would make more but i need some more charater names
and such so im thinking of stuff like that right now if you got any nice names (names that are very common will not work think of something nice dont be lazy and use bob or joe or anything like that)
and im trying to deiced whether to do double person story (tell story of two differnt people in one book) pre chapter and then as my story progresses their desitinys will intertwine - Report As Spam
- Zero Inferno X - 10/02/2008
- well this is only a rough draft and just starting story idea and just wanted opion so i wasnt aiming for punucations or that stuff it was just to get opion on what people thought of the starting story
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- Mr Creepy Stalker - 10/01/2008
- i just remembered, i would love to read the rest of your story, PM me please and we can talk about that and maybe i can help you with something for i've been writing stories for a long time now.
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- Mr Creepy Stalker - 10/01/2008
- wow, i really like the basis of the story, you just need to make little adjustments like on the second sentence: "As the bike zooms..." it really doesnt make sense... Another thing, try to use punctuation signs when you write, it really makes the story easier to read and understand.
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