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  • Fangthorn - 09/21/2008
  • help line. Just to let you know. This type of poem is called a couplet. It is suppose to only have two line stanzas.
  • Helpline - 09/14/2008
  • This has a great rhyme but maybe you should try to make the stanzas a little longer than 2 lines although that is a very good poem and a very good method by making the stanzas longer you could give your poem a better rhythm. However you did do a great job! 5/5
 
 
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