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  • Title: u bring the mustard...
  • Artist: rat goof
  • Description: this poem is written out of luv :heart:
    every body has expearianced love it is for all who have loved
    and ever will love

    my one true love and i have had a hrd realationship this is how it made me feel
    hotdogs with mustard was he favorite food that is the connection
  • Date: 07/22/2008
  • Tags: love mustard slipknot
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Acid Frenzy - 12/23/2008
  • It belongs in poetry. The spelling is akin to a ten-year-old who has just learned about the internet. The poem falls flat in the end. It means nothing, and the silliness destroyed any kind of depth or meaning it might have offered before the last three lines. Which wasn't much.
  • disgusting - 07/24/2008
  • it has the edge of a mature adult sharing thier feelings but then there are the hints of childish depression in there great work
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