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  • Title: Chemistry lesson
  • Artist: YukariKotoko
  • Description: This is what happened in a chemistry lesson at the end of term....drawn and painted by hand, then cleaned in photoshop and text done in photoshop. Sorry the background is a little plain!

    Heres the link to a larger version of the pic~ http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a303/_Kiara_Sota_/Natalie-school-magazine-1.jpg
  • Date: 07/17/2008
  • Tags: chemistry joke
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Wishful Desire - 08/01/2009
  • THey're gorgeously done.. but I feel like something's missing.. something that Matthew has already pointed out. sweatdrop
  • Matthew Jason Foxx - 07/13/2009
  • And the bottom left frame doesn't read quite "comicbook-right". The rest of the frames feel like comic book, but the bottom left feels like you just drew girls!! Now, they're -veeery WELL- drawn girls... but it just doesn't feel like it's from a comic book.

    I like your work! It's very beautiful! you don't have comic-book style down just yet. You'll need to work on the flow of pictures and text into a readable storyline, but don't quit!! You have potential.
  • Matthew Jason Foxx - 07/13/2009
  • I can't read this!! ;-; The writing is hard to read, first off and the "tempometer" line, b/c it is so important... needs to be written more clearly --though I liked the fact that you used a different, weird font for it. I wouldn't change that, just find a more readable font. x_x
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